Ground

August 28, 2008

A secret spark could have been the start of this, your slowed motion. Ripping through wires like lightning cracks and spins and spirals like wings belch smoke to meet the ground…which seems to be moving quicker than usual. Your voice like ice (and just as slick) slips past my ear and will certainly meet you all    the    way    down    here, where I’ll find a spot between the grass and wait, looking up to meet your face.

4 Responses to “Ground”

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  2. Shell said

    *melted*

    a short-of echo is on my site … there may be a better one later but i linked to this beautiful, beautiful poem, hope that’s ok?

    you inspire me, sweet shadow … deeply

  3. Paul said

    Oh, that is sly sliding one, lovely sounds and immaculte timing. Very cool,

  4. giantshadows said

    Thanks, Paul. I appreciate your kind words.

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